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David Eckels
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Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
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January 06, 2018, 09:44:40 pm »
C&C welcome. Any title suggestions?
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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
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January 10, 2018, 07:57:37 pm »
If it weren't for that "speaker" and the "vent" it would be a very beautiful image.
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January 10, 2018, 11:21:47 pm »
I think the "speaker" adds a bit of a nice chuckle, but I can certainly do without the "vent."
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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
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January 11, 2018, 10:02:02 am »
I like both the speaker and the vent. However, the pattern of the roof is not easly intergrated. I had thought to suggest much deeper shadows, but I doubt even that will tame it.
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January 11, 2018, 11:28:35 am »
Beautiful tone, color, and subjects. Much better without the vent/speaker. Btw, just name it very simply according to what or where it is - and leave the great image to "speak further" - an image like this doesn't need verbiage. /B
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David Eckels
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January 11, 2018, 03:40:37 pm »
Thanks for the comments, all! But without the speaker and vent, it wouldn't be photography!
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January 11, 2018, 04:17:33 pm »
OK, just because I considered removing the speaker and vent, too, I worked on this a few minutes ago.
Honestly, not sure which I like better, the clean or the real one.
The proverbial horns of a dilemma
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January 11, 2018, 06:22:33 pm »
I vote clean. Speaker and vent are distractions from the otherwise poetic vision. Better story, better told.
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January 11, 2018, 07:37:33 pm »
David,
I suggest looking at the original on Mondays through Wednesdays and the "cleaned" version on Thursdays through Saturdays for a few weeks, giving both a rest on Sundays. See which one feels right/better/more interesting/etc. to you after that.
It's a nice image either way.
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David Eckels
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January 12, 2018, 10:58:39 am »
Thanks Eric and Peter. Maybe I will title the clean one Bisbee MTW and the "dirty" one Bisbee TFS
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Peter McLennan
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January 12, 2018, 11:42:50 am »
Kudos on your excellent cloning skills, too.
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Quote from: Peter McLennan on January 12, 2018, 11:42:50 am
Kudos on your excellent cloning skills, too.
Absolutely!! And, for me, I like the one without
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David, thanks for posting such a thought provoking shot.
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