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Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« on: January 06, 2018, 09:44:40 PM »

C&C welcome. Any title suggestions?

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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #1 on: January 10, 2018, 07:57:37 PM »

If it weren't for that "speaker" and the "vent" it would be a very beautiful image.
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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #2 on: January 10, 2018, 11:21:47 PM »

I think the "speaker" adds a bit of a nice chuckle, but I can certainly do without the "vent."
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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #3 on: January 11, 2018, 10:02:02 AM »

I like both the speaker and the vent.  However, the pattern of the roof is not easly intergrated.  I had thought to suggest much deeper shadows, but I doubt even that will tame it.

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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #4 on: January 11, 2018, 11:28:35 AM »

Beautiful tone, color, and subjects. Much better without the vent/speaker. Btw, just name it very simply according to what or where it is - and leave the great image to "speak further" - an image like this doesn't need verbiage. /B
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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #5 on: January 11, 2018, 03:40:37 PM »

Thanks for the comments, all! But without the speaker and vent, it wouldn't be photography! ;)

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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #6 on: January 11, 2018, 04:17:33 PM »

OK, just because I considered removing the speaker and vent, too, I worked on this a few minutes ago. ;)
Honestly, not sure which I like better, the clean or the real one.
The proverbial horns of a dilemma :)

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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #7 on: January 11, 2018, 06:22:33 PM »

I vote clean.  Speaker and vent are distractions from the otherwise poetic vision.  Better story, better told.
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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #8 on: January 11, 2018, 07:37:33 PM »

David,

I suggest looking at the original on Mondays through Wednesdays and the "cleaned" version on Thursdays through Saturdays for a few weeks, giving both a rest on Sundays. See which one feels right/better/more interesting/etc. to you after that.

It's a nice image either way.

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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #9 on: January 12, 2018, 10:58:39 AM »

Thanks Eric and Peter. Maybe I will title the clean one Bisbee MTW and the "dirty" one Bisbee TFS ;D

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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #10 on: January 12, 2018, 11:42:50 AM »

Kudos on your excellent cloning skills, too. :)
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Re: Last one from Bisbee, maybe.
« Reply #11 on: January 12, 2018, 12:45:36 PM »

Kudos on your excellent cloning skills, too. :)


Absolutely!! And, for me, I like the one without :) !!

 David, thanks for posting such a thought provoking shot.

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