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sdwilsonsct

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Two towers
« on: June 07, 2014, 05:33:07 pm »

Suggestions welcome.

Jeremy Roussak

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Re: Two towers
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2014, 03:40:40 am »

I do like the first, though I wonder if you could open up the foreground shadows just a touch. I'm not keen on the second, which seems a bit dull - and the leaning flagpoles don't appeal.

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Re: Two towers
« Reply #2 on: June 08, 2014, 11:18:36 pm »

Thanks, Jeremy. Here is the foreground opened a bit, I think it's better.

Flagpoles are a bane of Iceland church photography. I have cloned out a "leaner" from the white church.

Then there's the Reykjavik concert hall with the nearby light poles really leaning in towards it...

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Re: Two towers
« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2014, 03:49:08 am »

Thanks, Jeremy. Here is the foreground opened a bit, I think it's better.

I agree, although you might have overdone it a bit in the pale area to the right.

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Re: Two towers
« Reply #4 on: June 10, 2014, 07:10:14 am »

But it's still better than the original image.
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Re: Two towers
« Reply #5 on: June 10, 2014, 10:46:50 am »

Thanks for the feedback. That area is pasture, so it could be lighter than the background mountain. OTOH it's distracting. I'll keep working on this.
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