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wmchauncey
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May 18, 2014, 07:49:47 am »
Still trying to get an artistic spin on falling droplets...filament was added for direction and to slow the rate of fall.
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David Jilek
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I feel that the background is taking away from the subject.
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John McDermott
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I really like this one.
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Wow, impressive!
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Eric Myrvaagnes
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May 18, 2014, 06:57:49 pm »
I'm quite in awe of the whole series of these. In this one, I find the background a bit too in-your-face. Perhaps a different color? Perhaps less saturation just for the background? (Not for the droplets; they're just fine.)
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luxborealis
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May 18, 2014, 09:27:29 pm »
Spectacular! Perhaps a contrasting olive green would set off the pinks better.
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May 19, 2014, 07:46:50 am »
Superb!
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Haven't yet given up
You're getting better and better, there's no reason to give up.
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May 19, 2014, 10:23:38 am »
Thanks guys, I really appreciate the accolades...in retrospect there are some artifacts that need attention.
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