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wmchauncey

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Haven't yet given up
« on: May 18, 2014, 07:49:47 am »

Still trying to get an artistic spin on falling droplets...filament was added for direction and to slow the rate of fall.

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David Jilek

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Re: Haven't yet given up
« Reply #1 on: May 18, 2014, 11:18:50 am »

I feel that the background is taking away from the subject.
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Re: Haven't yet given up
« Reply #2 on: May 18, 2014, 03:05:00 pm »

I really like this one.
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Re: Haven't yet given up
« Reply #3 on: May 18, 2014, 06:39:33 pm »

Wow, impressive!
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Re: Haven't yet given up
« Reply #4 on: May 18, 2014, 06:57:49 pm »

I'm quite in awe of the whole series of these. In this one, I find the background a bit too in-your-face. Perhaps a different color? Perhaps less saturation just for the background? (Not for the droplets; they're just fine.)
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Re: Haven't yet given up
« Reply #5 on: May 18, 2014, 09:27:29 pm »

Spectacular! Perhaps a contrasting olive green would set off the pinks better.
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Re: Haven't yet given up
« Reply #6 on: May 19, 2014, 07:46:50 am »

Superb!

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Re: Haven't yet given up
« Reply #7 on: May 19, 2014, 10:23:38 am »

Thanks guys, I really appreciate the accolades...in retrospect there are some artifacts that need attention.   ;)
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