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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: wmchauncey on May 18, 2014, 07:49:47 am

Title: Haven't yet given up
Post by: wmchauncey on May 18, 2014, 07:49:47 am

Still trying to get an artistic spin on falling droplets...filament was added for direction and to slow the rate of fall.

(http://i329.photobucket.com/albums/l383/chauncey43/droplets-part-deux-1.jpg) (http://s329.photobucket.com/user/chauncey43/media/droplets-part-deux-1.jpg.html)

Title: Re: Haven't yet given up
Post by: David Jilek on May 18, 2014, 11:18:50 am

I feel that the background is taking away from the subject.

Title: Re: Haven't yet given up
Post by: John McDermott on May 18, 2014, 03:05:00 pm

I really like this one.

Title: Re: Haven't yet given up
Post by: Iluvmycam on May 18, 2014, 06:39:33 pm

Wow, impressive!

Title: Re: Haven't yet given up
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 18, 2014, 06:57:49 pm

I'm quite in awe of the whole series of these. In this one, I find the background a bit too in-your-face. Perhaps a different color? Perhaps less saturation just for the background? (Not for the droplets; they're just fine.)

Title: Re: Haven't yet given up
Post by: luxborealis on May 18, 2014, 09:27:29 pm

Spectacular! Perhaps a contrasting olive green would set off the pinks better.

Title: Re: Haven't yet given up
Post by: francois on May 19, 2014, 07:46:50 am

Superb!

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Haven't yet given up

You're getting better and better, there's no reason to give up.

Title: Re: Haven't yet given up
Post by: wmchauncey on May 19, 2014, 10:23:38 am

Thanks guys, I really appreciate the accolades...in retrospect there are some artifacts that need attention.   ;)