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wmchauncey

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Still working on technique
« on: February 09, 2014, 07:09:26 pm »

Not entirely satisfied with the background on this...what say you all?


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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2014, 07:13:17 pm »

That's a striking photo, but ... of what? I am intrigued.
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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2014, 07:16:02 pm »

It's a macro droplet showing a flower...
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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #3 on: February 09, 2014, 07:27:26 pm »

I am in awe of your technique. Is that an orchid in the background? I must say that I find the greens a bit harsh, I wonder if you toned them down a bit if might be better - worth trying, I think.
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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #4 on: February 09, 2014, 08:17:37 pm »

This is a wonderful image with oodles of potential.
My only thought might be to tone down the whole background a bit and leave that wonderful drop of water as the undoubted centrepiece.
It may not work but it might be worth a try.

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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #5 on: February 09, 2014, 08:20:59 pm »

It's pretty fantastic to me. I can't imagine how you get the droplet to stay still in mid air long enough to focus so precisely and expose.
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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #6 on: February 09, 2014, 08:21:43 pm »

This is a wonderful image with oodles of potential.
My only thought might be to tone down the whole background a bit and leave that wonderful drop of water as the undoubted centrepiece.
It may not work but it might be worth a try.

Tony Jay

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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #7 on: February 10, 2014, 03:54:53 am »

It's pretty fantastic to me. I can't imagine how you get the droplet to stay still in mid air long enough to focus so precisely and expose.


I'm curious too. This image is stunning but I would be eager to learn more about your setup as I've never tried my hand at that kind of photography.
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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2014, 04:57:03 am »

Background is too strong/distracting. Brilliant concept though.

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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2014, 08:32:11 am »

I kinda hesitate to share my technique until I have it nailed down a lot more better.       ;D
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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #10 on: February 10, 2014, 08:56:45 am »

I kinda hesitate to share my technique until I have it nailed down a lot more better.       ;D

Does it involve CGI?  :P
(Don't answer this - it's purely rethorical ...)

Great shot!

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Re: Still working on technique
« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2014, 09:01:55 am »

Background is too strong/distracting.
Jim

It's the feeling I get too.
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