I disagree. As presented, these photos are delicate, ephemeral, and communicate the feeling of being in heavy fog. Well done! Although the first one puzzles me, what's the rectangle in the center?
Thanks, Peter. That 'thing' is the outflow structure to the man-made lake.
I like them. For my taste, they have too much grain/noise, which detracts from the intended (was it?) tranquil mood.
Thanks, Paulo. I intentionally added the grain and obscured the details. Not everyone's cup of tea.
I like the 2nd one best because it has a bit more structure.
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Others have also commented that the second has more structure, with its leading line, etc. Honestly, while I like it, the first one is my favorite because of its ambiguity, but that's just me. Thanks.