Thanks, Eric, Francois. I always want to beat someone else to the punch, Eric!
Francois, I didn't have something different in mind when I took the shot, but I couldn't get the color balance to look right in post and so I went for BW. As I look at it this morning, I think I want to soften it quite a bit, maybe +1 EV in the darks to midtones. I do appreciate your reactions and you've helped get me oriented correctly.
Attached, is more where I was headed, but again, maybe went too far.