+1
Vignetting is huge , overlap too small, colours not equal-
Bad start
The color shift in blue is not vignetting but CPL filter in action. When you've got a large field of view you will almost never get uniform color in the sky when using a polariser.
Did you rotate about the nodal point? This becomes more important when you have close foreground objects as with the boulders.
when using multiple cameras to do simultaneous capture to prevent issues with waves, rotating around a nodal point is not possible.
That set of 3 was at 22mm (*1.6). From another set of pictures, taken at 14mm (*1.6), I generated the attached image. As you can see, when merging raw images, the CPL issue becomes less of a bother.
If there's anything wrong, it might be that LR's algorithms don't work on narrower fields of view but that needs more testing. And by narrower, I mean anything narrow than ~24mm (FF). But that doesn't explain the "works for preview but not full images."