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Mark Nadler

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Rope in Sand
« on: October 27, 2019, 02:16:06 pm »

All comments welcomed.

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Jeremy Roussak

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Re: Rope in Sand
« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2019, 02:59:38 pm »

I like it. I'd get rid of the V-shaped pair of lines on the middle right, though, whether by cloning them out or lightening them. I find them distracting.

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Re: Rope in Sand
« Reply #2 on: October 28, 2019, 09:14:58 am »

I like it very much and agree with Jeremy with the dark V-shaped lines.
Bravo!
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Re: Rope in Sand
« Reply #3 on: October 28, 2019, 08:55:51 pm »

Jeremy and francois thanks.  See if this looks better.

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Re: Rope in Sand
« Reply #4 on: October 28, 2019, 11:44:16 pm »

Now I like it. The new version feels better balanced.
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Re: Rope in Sand
« Reply #5 on: October 29, 2019, 12:00:55 am »

It was a good idea. The out-of-focus part ruins the concept. Back to the drawing board.

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Re: Rope in Sand
« Reply #6 on: October 29, 2019, 04:48:05 am »

Jeremy and francois thanks.  See if this looks better.

Yes. Excellent. You've also tamed the small highlights in the rope, which I'd not even noticed before.

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Re: Rope in Sand
« Reply #7 on: October 29, 2019, 05:14:27 am »

Yes, definitely better.
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Re: Rope in Sand
« Reply #8 on: October 30, 2019, 12:33:30 pm »

Jeremy and francois, thanks.

Slobodan, unfortunately the drawing board on this image is long gone -- this was not a setup shot.  If I could I would definitely give your suggestion
a try.  I really can't tell if it would improve this image. 

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