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Mark Nadler
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Rope in Sand
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October 27, 2019, 02:16:06 pm »
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Jeremy Roussak
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Re: Rope in Sand
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October 27, 2019, 02:59:38 pm »
I like it. I'd get rid of the V-shaped pair of lines on the middle right, though, whether by cloning them out or lightening them. I find them distracting.
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October 28, 2019, 09:14:58 am »
I like it very much and agree with Jeremy with the dark V-shaped lines.
Bravo!
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October 28, 2019, 08:55:51 pm »
Jeremy and francois thanks. See if this looks better.
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October 28, 2019, 11:44:16 pm »
Now I like it. The new version feels better balanced.
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October 29, 2019, 12:00:55 am »
It was a good idea. The out-of-focus part ruins the concept. Back to the drawing board.
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Jeremy Roussak
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October 29, 2019, 04:48:05 am »
Quote from: Mark Nadler on October 28, 2019, 08:55:51 pm
Jeremy and francois thanks. See if this looks better.
Yes. Excellent. You've also tamed the small highlights in the rope, which I'd not even noticed before.
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Yes, definitely better.
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October 30, 2019, 12:33:30 pm »
Jeremy and francois, thanks.
Slobodan, unfortunately the drawing board on this image is long gone -- this was not a setup shot. If I could I would definitely give your suggestion
a try. I really can't tell if it would improve this image.
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