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Mark Nadler

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Hawaiian Fantasy
« on: June 20, 2019, 11:37:24 pm »

This picture was taken downtown Honolulu.  Comments welcomed.

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Re: Hawaiian Fantasy
« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2019, 06:21:52 am »

Strong portrait.
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Re: Hawaiian Fantasy
« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2019, 06:57:44 pm »

Strong portrait.
Despite the highlights, everything is positioned so the character of the person comes through. I would suggest toning down brightness of the bottom right green area so that it doesn't attract too much attention. Well done!

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Re: Hawaiian Fantasy
« Reply #3 on: June 21, 2019, 07:03:25 pm »

J.R. thanks.  I agree with your comment.  I will make your suggested
change.

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