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The Art of Photography => Street Showcase => Topic started by: Mark Nadler on June 20, 2019, 11:37:24 pm

Title: Hawaiian Fantasy
Post by: Mark Nadler on June 20, 2019, 11:37:24 pm

This picture was taken downtown Honolulu.  Comments welcomed.

mark

Title: Re: Hawaiian Fantasy
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 21, 2019, 06:21:52 am

Strong portrait.

Title: Re: Hawaiian Fantasy
Post by: John R on June 21, 2019, 06:57:44 pm

Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 21, 2019, 06:21:52 am

Strong portrait.

Despite the highlights, everything is positioned so the character of the person comes through. I would suggest toning down brightness of the bottom right green area so that it doesn't attract too much attention. Well done!

JR

Title: Re: Hawaiian Fantasy
Post by: Mark Nadler on June 21, 2019, 07:03:25 pm

J.R. thanks.  I agree with your comment.  I will make your suggested
change.

Mark