I absolutely love the composition and the subject, that part of it I think is wonderful, but not sure about the overly 'crunchy' processing. But hey, everyone to their own style and ways of working, so it if works for you then stick with it I say. But for me its not so much about the colours of the sky as Peter pointed out above, it's more about that overly crunchy look that I am struggling with. But as a piece of dreamscape surrealism, then yes it certainly delivers that in spades.
Dave