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sgwrx

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Another B&W critique
« on: May 14, 2006, 10:33:40 pm »

how does this look?  is it large enough to judge?  thanks.
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« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2006, 05:30:14 am »

Thanks for posting your image. I would have really liked it if the car on the left was not chopped off. I think it would have worked compositionally a lot better if the two cars were both whole. Is this site nearby to you?? Perhaps another shot including all of the vehicle may be worth another try.

Julie
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« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2006, 07:15:10 pm »

thanks.  they are about a 2hr drive away, but i'm up that way frequently.  how do you like the conversion to b&w?
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« Reply #3 on: May 15, 2006, 08:06:56 pm »

That's good that you have another opportunity to photograph. I love the way the windscreen wipers and headlights are positioned on each vehicle. They give the vehicles a bit of life I think.... sort of like two old companions...just waiting. That's why I think having them whole would work better. Let us know if you get the opportunity to go there again.

Sorry, can't comment on the B&W conversion...I have never done any myself and am unsure of the finer points in this field.
Julie
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« Reply #4 on: May 16, 2006, 11:24:41 am »

thanks. yes hopefully i'll get another chance within a month or so. and i'll try to get a heavliy overcast day or early morning.
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« Reply #5 on: August 02, 2006, 08:06:49 am »

Where you get it???
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