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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: sgwrx on May 14, 2006, 10:33:40 pm

Title: Another B&W critique
Post by: sgwrx on May 14, 2006, 10:33:40 pm
how does this look?  is it large enough to judge?  thanks.
Title: Another B&W critique
Post by: jule on May 15, 2006, 05:30:14 am
Thanks for posting your image. I would have really liked it if the car on the left was not chopped off. I think it would have worked compositionally a lot better if the two cars were both whole. Is this site nearby to you?? Perhaps another shot including all of the vehicle may be worth another try.

Julie
Title: Another B&W critique
Post by: sgwrx on May 15, 2006, 07:15:10 pm
thanks.  they are about a 2hr drive away, but i'm up that way frequently.  how do you like the conversion to b&w?
Title: Another B&W critique
Post by: jule on May 15, 2006, 08:06:56 pm
That's good that you have another opportunity to photograph. I love the way the windscreen wipers and headlights are positioned on each vehicle. They give the vehicles a bit of life I think.... sort of like two old companions...just waiting. That's why I think having them whole would work better. Let us know if you get the opportunity to go there again.

Sorry, can't comment on the B&W conversion...I have never done any myself and am unsure of the finer points in this field.
Julie
Title: Another B&W critique
Post by: sgwrx on May 16, 2006, 11:24:41 am
thanks. yes hopefully i'll get another chance within a month or so. and i'll try to get a heavliy overcast day or early morning.
Title: Another B&W critique
Post by: Dicbeksew on August 02, 2006, 08:06:49 am
Where you get it???