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Chris Calohan
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Maya's Bird
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November 13, 2014, 08:52:22 pm »
Caged Bird: Maya Angelou
A free bird leaps
on the back of the wind
and floats downstream
till the current ends
and dips his wing
in the orange sun rays
and dares to claim the sky.
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Colorado David
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November 13, 2014, 09:22:30 pm »
Nice capture. Good wing position and sharp eye. Since the bird appears to be climbing, I would prefer the space to be above and to the front rather than below and to the front. Minor point.
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