The old "that depends" answer. In fact, this topic and these examples aren't about cropping at all -- but about composition. Your longer shot is very conventional, well framed, and conveys a certain building. I can see it hanging on the architect's office wall. The closeup is far different and much more intriguing in that it conveys the stark reality of all modern buildings. The closeup features unexpected rough texture and evidence of brute strength as well as a pleasing arrangement of elements, especially the negative triangular space in the center. I can see it hanging on anyone's wall who appreciates fine contemporary images. Well done.