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William Walker

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Dayone - Take Two
« on: December 12, 2013, 02:23:23 pm »
Another B&W Leopard portrait.

Your comments are always welcome.

William
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Christoph C. Feldhaim

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Re: Dayone - Take Two
« Reply #1 on: December 12, 2013, 02:56:46 pm »
Top Image !
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Re: Dayone - Take Two
« Reply #2 on: December 12, 2013, 11:28:08 pm »
Nice - much better than the first one.  I like the way he (or she?) is salivating, maybe thinking about eating the photographer!

You might want to look at darkening that background on the right and that little blob above its head.
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Re: Dayone - Take Two
« Reply #3 on: December 13, 2013, 06:18:57 pm »
I agree! I like this one much better.
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