LOL If you are going for surreal, why not make it look like the flows on my little island? Looks like the lava was a little soupy that day.
In all seriousness, I love the water, as you captured it. The composition is nice, but the texture of the water has just the right amount of silkiness to steal the show. I'm not big on the red, but think that this would look great in sepia or B & W.