Wonderful - it's great to see photographers trying new ways of seeing - nicely done. This will certainly morph into something you are even happier with. I like the way you are showing us some of the details and allowing us to imagine the larger landscape for ourselves based on the parts you've tantalizingly given us.
I find I enjoy triptychs more when each photo can stand on its own and I think you are approaching that point here. Keep at it and show us more of what you come up with!