Et voila. Agree with some of the other comments -- i.e.: not sure I would develop this one -- but since you ask it must have some importance to you. I like the presence of the viewer of the scene at the plot, and I like the entrance to the plot (and, likewise, the presence of the viewer of the picture and the entrance to the picture), so I chose to emphasize that, aware that, as is, both the picture and the scene are not navigable in any satisfactory way by the beholder.
I don't like the representation or the placement of the OoF white blossoms on the far side of the far fence. This, to me, is the most problematic aspect of the data (second to the coarseness).
Here's one (quick) effort -- a foil for your own
(Sorry -- don't know how to post as a thumbnail.)