So, crop it to the right, go stand in the water, Get another camera body capable of shooting 16:9 so the church isn't so central. Hmm I don't think any of those suggestions work... And Monet would have wanted more blossoms on the lilies. Apart from that, you, I presume like the image, I like the image. Most people don't have time to stand and calculate angles etc. I repeat, nice image, I'd be pleased. P.s. I'm glad you didn't convert it to B&W.....