Interesting abstract. It's definitely neat, and I think it's good.
The only part I go back and forth on is the blown out highlights. On the one hand, they're distracting as hell, and on the other hand you're supposed to be looking there so maybe that's ok and anyways it's a great way to convey the eerie sense of heat and otherworldliness that comes with fires. If it were mine, I would experiment with pushing more detail in there to see what happens.