I got to wonder about the phenomenon:
We the people of technology are
not always good writers, and so some generic advices for formulation of papers, documents and essays are very common. The most basic of them, let me call it the "Prime Directive," is
'Never start a paper with a word "This Paper"'. This should be as known as the meaning of green and red light at the street corner.
And yet, this essay "
Compact System Camera Image Quality" starts with:
"In this paper we review..."
and than only a few lines later the next paragraph starts with:
"This paper reviews the image quality factors..."
Of course, this should not diminish the technical knowledge and its generic unquestionable value, however one have to wonder if enough effort was made in selecting and putting together the content. We know that "a paper" is not a being or a mechanism, it cannot review anything... Posts in a public forum may of any quality, both in content and in grammatical valor for a variety of reasons. Not so an essay! May I suggest to re-formulate and re-post?