I agree with the comments above. An additional thought: If you single out a small group of leaves, regardless of whether you consider them less important than the light and shapes, the viewer will still close in on the leaves. In that case, the expectation is probably of seeing clean, if not perfect leaves. If you choose to show damaged leaves, the damage should probably be striking in nature, in which case it becomes a statement. The leaves you've depicted are damaged in a very average way, and I think it detracts from your image.