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Jonathan Wienke

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« Reply #120 on: February 06, 2005, 01:53:06 pm »

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All that said, I must say that I was not overly impressed with your black and white photo as published here Jonathan. I suspect that the original is much more beautiful than the version that I am seeing through the media of internet and graphics card and monitor. I love black and white work, and your piece appears to be technically very well done. The subject matter is interesting and nicely composed as well. I just find the photo ... flat. I think the rest of your work presented here is on a higher level.
As I said before, I have no problem with a negative critique if it is thoughtful and well-reasoned and presented reasonably civilly. What I find irritating are negative comments that by the poster's own admission, have no basis other than rudeness for rudeness' sake.
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« Reply #121 on: February 09, 2005, 12:41:26 pm »

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I could suggest you crop a bit more off the top of the sky, but that's a minor refinement.
Minor, but worth doing. I decided to go back to the original panorama concept and widened the scope of the image back to 3:1, while trimming just a bit more off the top. This version is a bit bigger, so I'm linking it as a
548K JPEG.
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« Reply #122 on: February 10, 2005, 09:13:15 pm »

Well I saw yours, I guess I should show you mine...

Awesome pictures everyone!

Jonathan, I don't care what anyone says...It's a good picture..

I have been shooting for a year now...I am very much a BEGINNER!

Critisism will be much appreciated weather positive or not..

here goes...


Blue Moon
Utica Reservoir, CA. on the blue moon.


Nevada Hues
Yerington, Nevada.


Peregrine Falcon
Livermore, California.


Petrified Cliff
near Fallen Leaf Lake, South Lake Tahoe, California


Pride Rock
Livermore, California


Road Less Traveled
Livermore, California


Rolling Hills
Livermore, California


Sahara Sunset
Santa Fe, New Mexico


Dutch Windmill
San Francisco, California

Thanks,

Hope you enjoyed!
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« Reply #123 on: February 14, 2005, 10:46:27 am »

playing around with still life and the 1dsmk2



      tulip

             jim
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« Reply #124 on: May 20, 2005, 08:20:29 am »

Well Katherine you started the ball rolling, I see you like taking photos of birds. My favorate at the moment is the Great Blue Heron, My dog "Bits" and I spend many wonderful hours tracking and walking the wet lands and cranberry bogs of New Jersey photographing them and the other animals.

How did you get your photos to come up in the message box like you did. I think that was good. I am not to good at posting stuff. Also what size were your photos. As I would like to show some of my photos, why take em and not show em!

Bob
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« Reply #125 on: August 08, 2005, 08:11:06 pm »

Hi Folks,

It's a while since I visited here so here are some of my shots:

My Webpage

I hope that you like them,

Cheers,

Jeff
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« Reply #126 on: November 09, 2004, 08:13:04 pm »

I see very few people actually posting their photographs here so I'll post a few to start the ball rolling a bit faster.

assorted photos

The fiddlers at the end of the series are not landscapes of course, but they are three of the best fiddlers in Canada. Reigning Canadian Master Mark Sullivan, Ann Lederman (Canadian National Treasure) and James Stephens, legendary Ottawa fiddler.

The landscapes were taken this summer and fall in the Haliburtons and on the Bruce Peninsula and Grey Country.

I use a Canon Digital Rebel with the standard lens as well as a Canon 80-300.
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« Reply #127 on: November 11, 2004, 12:46:48 am »

Here's a couple from this summer.

La Push, WA

Dunes, Gold Beach, OR
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« Reply #128 on: December 03, 2004, 06:58:50 pm »

Excellent.
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« Reply #129 on: January 09, 2005, 05:51:20 pm »

Hi, I'm new here too. This really is a great site. Here's my 2 cents off my web site.

http://improbablystructuredlayers.net/Beauty/Main.htm

It works a little different away from the frame structure but it still works and it won't bore you with the rest of the non-photographic stuff.

Here are a couple of selections from Long Island and Puerto Rico. L.I. 2 is with an EOS 1DsII, the other three with a Contax ND:

Long Island 1    Long Island 2
Puerto Rico 1    Puerto Rico 2

I'm off to China for a couple of weeks, so hopefully we'll get a couple of good shots. Happy New Year shooting!

DJ
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« Reply #130 on: February 06, 2005, 02:10:14 pm »

"But just making up random unfounded criticism is rather pointless, and not conducive to enhancing one's reputation as an insightful critic with something meaningful to say."

"[R]andom unfounded criticism" should be limited to comments without a basis.  "It's nice" or "It sucks."  Again, it is the why that matters.  It seems to me that Jonathan's comment would require that the reviewer and photographer agree on the foundation.  I don't like an image because the composition doesn't meet the rule od thirds.  The photographer doesn't think there are any rules.  Is the criticism unfounded?  I don't think so.  The photographer can still think "I like it and it doesn't matter what you think."  We all know that, so why mention it?  Now, "Why did you compose it this way?" is another matter.  Again, "I wanted to" is not educational.

I remember a critique when the instructor said "You get an F because the image is out of focus."  Student said "I wanted it out of focus."  Instructor said "I want to give you an F."
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« Reply #131 on: February 09, 2005, 09:50:33 am »

Much better, Jonathan. This is a fine example of what cropping can do to an image. Before, there was an interesting backdrop of misty mountains but nothing for the eye to settle on. Now you've made the mountains the focus of interest and the road, leading the eye towards the pass, is more prominent.

I could suggest you crop a bit more off the top of the sky, but that's a minor refinement.

Christopher, great photos! Each one suggests a lot of thought. The first one, the lighthouse, is a classic rule of thirds and very striking. The lighthouse joins the lower 2/3rds to the upper 1/3rd and is quite mesmerising in its starkness and clarity. (Phallic as well, of course).

The two trees are minimalist and beautiful. Just the right proportions.

The Swiss scene is also a very well balanced picture that is more than a chocolate box cover. The entire scene seems to have just the right ingredients in the right place, but I prefer the first two.
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« Reply #132 on: February 10, 2005, 08:54:17 pm »

Ok I posted 2 photos and I was able to see them all afternoon in my computer at home, now I come to work and they have become little x's. I got them from the PBase gallery, I right click on the picture and I copy them and then pasted them in the reply window. What I am doing wrong?

Andres
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« Reply #133 on: February 14, 2005, 12:24:02 pm »

Hi Doc,

 Thanks much. You're images are very powerful in  
 design and composition. For me this is what photography
 is all about. Have you studied composition and design
 formally?

 Bellow is a quick recap of the last Glacial Divide trip.
 I'm currently in the planning stages of three or more
 trips starting in May. Each one should be about a 2-3
 weeks. I'll be exporing some new remote areas along the
 Pacific Crest trail.

 If you're interested in updates ... let me know.
 
 
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Part Three: Glacial Divide

This trip was an intense experience in the presence of high altitude storms. To capture the rapture of these moments photographically helps sear into me the intensity of these locations (I do not wanna forget um).There is no way to get to these places without being .. hmm ... OBSESSED.
No planes, no cruises, no freeways, no trails ... but the payoff is priceless. To recap; I arrived late at North Lake and headed up the Piute Trail. Since I didn't have a chance to acclimate to altitude and dusk was upon me I decided to stop at Piute Lake. Besides, I always wanted to
do some photo shoots there. Next morning on to the Humphreys Basin. As soon as I make the pass it's off the trails (I always bushwhack up there, get off the freakin freeway ... so to speak). The Humphreys Basin, an interesting area carved by ancient glaciers, framed by the dominance
of Mount Humphreys.  Oh Mt Humphreys! One of natures truly great monuments. Please, no sculptured heads of State. From there on to the Golden Trout lakes, where I established a base camp. Started exploring the area. Decided
to direct my energy toward there mote Packsaddle Lake (just below the Matthes Glaciers) or what's left of them ... Did you know the Glaciers really are melting?  Did a lot of exploring ... next trip planning on climbing up the Matthes Glaciers. From the top looking southwest, Evolution Valley and
Goddard Canyon would be in full panoramic view. Ah! Another place to explore. Since I was now at high elevation, my intention was to climb up to Paine Lake
(a high glacial lake above 12000 ft.). Didn't make it. Another time and that's a definite. On to Wahoo Lake, witnessed an extraordinary meteor shower. Needless to say it kept me up for the better part of the night.  Morning and
up into the Goethe Cirque, an immense glaciated area. Time constraints now dictated I start thinking about getting back. Started moving down out of theGoethe Cirque and spent the last night at Muriel Lake. One can get really ambitious up there and forget how enormous, how vast it is. Having
"Wander Lust" makes it more so.

Events that made this trip more impactful were the intense storms moving over the High Sierras. At high altitude in the Sierra Nevada, DO NOT listen to what the weatherman says. DO, anticipate, assess and act. Thunderstorms
come in many forms. The worst entities in the thunderstorm world are MCS's(mesoscale convective systems). That's a fancy way of saying they're a system of thunderstorms ranging in size from roughly twelve to several
hundred miles. They come in many flavors: squall lines, drylines, bow echoes and more. Squall lines were the thunderstorm events of this trip.
If a squall line moves over your camp at high altitude, it's an experience you won't soon forget. Heavy rain, high winds, hail, snow, intense lightning and thunder ... etc ...

Anyway that's the quick of it ... Stay tuned.


Well! It's of to Europa, a large dense icy moon of Jupiter.
I here tell there my be chemical signatures of life.
Should have some interesting experiences, observations and
images.
         "I Wish".
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« Reply #134 on: May 17, 2005, 01:23:38 am »

Nice shots, Jim. Here's another one of mine:



For some reason I seem to be on a B&W kick lately, at least for landscape stuff.
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« Reply #135 on: July 29, 2005, 05:31:50 am »

Here are some of mine (flip back with the " < " button on the top of the page): Photos

Regards,
Johann
http://js.smugmug.com
http://joephotos.blogspot.com
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« Reply #136 on: November 10, 2004, 10:01:36 am »

Thanks for posting these!  I really enjoyed the photo of the canoe by the dockside - I have a soft spot for canoe pictures  Also like the shots of the fiddlers - very atmospheric  :cool:
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« Reply #137 on: November 10, 2004, 10:08:46 pm »

Paul! wow.

What an absolutely gorgeous planet we live on!

Let's keep the ball rolling here! This is great!
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« Reply #138 on: January 07, 2005, 08:31:14 pm »

renhoek, I like this shot.  The contrast is great.  It is very industrial looking and might make a corporate annual report image.

I would crop off some of the bottom, up top the point where the top of the wall meets the left edge.  I don't think the lower part of the wall adds much interest and makes the image a bit top heavy.

Next I would crop the left side into where the two conveyors meet.  This allows your eye to follow on conveyor to the edge and then back again without retracing.  It also eliminates the isolated white patch between the conveyors, and the verticle white line against the pile of stuff.  The crop also moves the bright building more to the left third and makes a strong verticle structure.  Then there might be a bit of very light cloud along the left edge.  I would burn it down to make it less eye catching.

A super nit.  There is a small white spot of cloud just left of the top of the building roof.  I would clone that out.  I think it is distracting.

The stairs on the building, conveyors and booms all make diagonal lines and add interest.  Very nice shot and well toned.
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« Reply #139 on: February 10, 2005, 08:28:17 pm »

first was at luxor temple. to the left and to my right are about 2000 tourists.  same with the second, which i belive was at Edfu (near Aswan). Both were shot with a mamiya 7II and 43mm lens. both on tripod. i had to wait a long time for no people to be in these shots :^)   Egypt is crawling with tourists

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