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David Eckels

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Forest Floor
« on: September 06, 2023, 07:57:50 pm »

I keep coming back to this one

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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2023, 08:03:28 pm »

It's very nice, there's good reason for it. Did you try a touch more contrast/increased blacks/clarity/dehaze in the background? (the blacks look a little too lightened)

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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2023, 04:37:35 am »

I like the darker mood it conveys, sort of envelops the viewer in mystery.

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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2023, 07:04:23 am »

The forest looks deep and dark but the light patch of moss brings a magical touch. Yes, it remains mysterious, as Paulo wrote above, but not that sinister.
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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #4 on: September 07, 2023, 10:44:17 am »

Thanks for the comments, gentlemen, very much appreciated.
Armand, yes, I have gone back and forth on the contrast question. In this version, I've gone the opposite direction to reflect what I remember as an atmospheric condition, twilight, low light, filtered sunshine on the foreground. Also, I find if I lift the blacks about +15 with an otherwise straight curve, I get a matte effect that is very conducive to printing, although I'd have to lift the highlights a bit.
Paulo and Francois, I was going for that darker mysterious mood also as an emphasis for the foreground, but I didn't want to transition into sinister because that was not how I felt at the time. I remember hiking around the bend and was stopped by what felt like a magic moment; reminds me of a song ;)

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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2023, 04:30:11 pm »

On one of my past walks, I came across an old moss covered log, with the bright greens in your scene, but not late evening. It also stopped me as well.

Very lovely light with some mystery.
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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2023, 06:36:34 pm »

Thank you, Leszek, they are indeed magic moments.

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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #7 on: September 08, 2023, 10:03:24 am »

Hey, David, when outside I come across scenes with an intense mood that I cannot translate into an image.  Your image depicts such a scene.  I have looked at your picture multiple times and still don't know if I like it.  But keep posting images like it.   

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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #8 on: September 08, 2023, 04:14:22 pm »

David,

Humbly, this scene is more ( for me ) much more than magic,

One can walk many kilometres in a forest,... and not come across one like this.

Thanks
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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #9 on: September 08, 2023, 06:58:57 pm »

Thank you! Fantastic and interesting comments, they capture some of what I feel about this image, now and when I discovered it in the forest.

Mark, I so appreciate what you are saying and I ask myself why I keep returning; do I go this way or that way? For me, there is a primordial feeling, and mystery for sure, but which could easily border into the sinister, and yet there are those golden highlights in the ground cover. I remember a small group of hikers that stopped to raise their selfie cams and I was glad I had my tripod set up so they couldn't intrude; I resented their presence. And thanks, I'll keep posting -- because I think this touches what I would like to express as an artist.

Leszek, I get what you're saying. If I had to choose adjectives perhaps I'd go with sublime, ephemeral, maybe not magic, but numinous, or maybe just leave out the thousand words :) Part of why I love photography are these surprising moments when I'm reminded I have a soul, and as you intimate, I wish I would come upon them more often, but then their value would be diluted by their commonality.

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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #10 on: September 10, 2023, 07:28:28 pm »

David, indeed, not many would come across a scene as what you have shown.

Thanks so much for sharing.

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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #11 on: September 11, 2023, 10:26:03 am »

The green patch is a tad too bright and contrasty for the overall mood. Otherwise, excellent.
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Re: Forest Floor
« Reply #12 on: September 11, 2023, 12:37:32 pm »

I appreciate the feedback Slobodan, I just look at it with 8)   ;) 
I think the jpeg compression and sharpening regimen doesn't help. Printing is my gold standard these days.
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