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Chris Calohan

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Late Afternoon Shower
« on: January 07, 2022, 02:26:42 pm »

I spent about a week working through some of the TK8 (Tony Kuyper) panels using Dave Kelly’s youtube tutorials. This is image was a step by step of “Finding the Right Light.” I did do some modifications after the guidelines to strengthen the foreground separation of the low grasses to the higher ones and tweaked the rain area a bit more for better contrast. I also used one of his other tutorials on Orton sharpening but I find the end result to be overly dark, so I lowered the opacity on the dark Orton mask.

I've included the original SOOC image.
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Re: Late Afternoon Shower
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2022, 03:55:21 pm »

Great work, Chris.  Very generous of you to share the before and after. Thank you. Most instructive and most appealing.
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Re: Late Afternoon Shower
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2022, 04:29:42 pm »

I completely agree with Peter.
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Re: Late Afternoon Shower
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2022, 07:20:12 pm »

the second is sublime.
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Re: Late Afternoon Shower
« Reply #4 on: January 08, 2022, 06:33:06 am »

the second is sublime.

Exactly my thought; nicely done.
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Re: Late Afternoon Shower
« Reply #5 on: January 08, 2022, 08:32:18 am »

The second is the untouched one, I presume. 
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Re: Late Afternoon Shower
« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2022, 10:53:26 am »

The second is the untouched one, I presume.

You assume correctly.
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Re: Late Afternoon Shower
« Reply #7 on: January 11, 2022, 06:47:24 am »

Punchier or milder, different interpretations. When I click to zoom in on #1, it looks over sharpened, but I like the tonality.

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Re: Late Afternoon Shower
« Reply #8 on: January 22, 2022, 11:58:51 am »

Looks a bit crunchy to me.  Overdone in the processing with lots of halos.
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