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Savage Mill Dive Bar
« on: October 31, 2021, 03:09:10 pm »

The "Dive Bar" is nestled in the small inner courtyard of the Savage Mill complex. A watercolor rendering seemed appropriate for this quaint cafe.

Your thoughts and suggestions are always welcomed, and I thank you for taking the time to view my photograph.
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Re: Savage Mill Dive Bar
« Reply #1 on: October 31, 2021, 04:36:32 pm »

i hope they license copies for their menu and website !
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Re: Savage Mill Dive Bar
« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2021, 05:02:17 pm »

Thanks degrub.
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Re: Savage Mill Dive Bar
« Reply #3 on: October 31, 2021, 09:20:03 pm »

I do like this one but find the vignette too strong. If you are able, can you reduce it so the it has a more natural, gradual blend with image.

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Re: Savage Mill Dive Bar
« Reply #4 on: October 31, 2021, 11:14:37 pm »

I agree with John R's suggestion.

The establishment looks a bit too elegant to fit the usual meaning of a "dive."
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Re: Savage Mill Dive Bar
« Reply #5 on: November 01, 2021, 04:57:48 am »

Superb but also agree with the too strong vignette. Other than that, it's a beauty with soft colors and a very nice building.
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Re: Savage Mill Dive Bar
« Reply #6 on: November 01, 2021, 06:49:27 am »

John R and Eric: Thank you. I'll try your suggested change and appreciate your thoughts.
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Re: Savage Mill Dive Bar
« Reply #7 on: November 01, 2021, 01:46:59 pm »

I agree with degrub and the comment to reduce vignetting.  Make a nice post card.

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Re: Savage Mill Dive Bar
« Reply #8 on: November 01, 2021, 03:18:07 pm »

I lightened up the vignette, hopefully without taking away the 'wash' effect that I like surrounding the subject.
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