Topic: Beauty Passing (Read 441 times)

David Eckels · « **on:** September 18, 2021, 12:01:41 pm »

An experiment to be sure. Interested in C&C of all types. Thanks in advance!

Eric Myrvaagnes · « **Reply #1 on:** September 18, 2021, 12:54:58 pm »

I find it poignant and effective.

Bob_B · « **Reply #2 on:** September 19, 2021, 07:02:40 am »

I like it too. May I suggest muting the background a bit more: less contrast, more blur. Not a lot, just a bit to soften it?

francois · « **Reply #3 on:** September 21, 2021, 05:41:33 am »

Yes, this shot is touching… this is the last flash before the end but beauty is still there.

David Eckels · « **Reply #4 on:** September 23, 2021, 03:27:29 pm »

I reworked this according to Bob's suggestions. I agree, having let it "sit" for a while.

Eric Myrvaagnes · « **Reply #5 on:** September 23, 2021, 07:09:04 pm »

Yes, I think you nailed it now.

David Eckels · « **Reply #6 on:** September 23, 2021, 09:14:35 pm »

Thanks, Eric.

francois · « **Reply #7 on:** September 25, 2021, 08:37:15 am »

Yes, I think you nailed it now.

Agreed, it even better…

David Eckels · « **Reply #8 on:** September 25, 2021, 09:15:14 am »

Very helpful, thanks Francois for your comments.

MattBurt · « **Reply #9 on:** October 15, 2021, 11:52:23 am »

Nice. The rework is my preference.

David Eckels · « **Reply #10 on:** October 15, 2021, 12:03:02 pm »

Thanks, Matt.