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Todd Suttles
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More or less to the story? Interesting? Or maybe not at all either way?
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>The pointing woman in the upper left<
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The one with the pointing woman is somewhat surreal. I like it.
The one with her just standing there does nothing for me.
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Woman? What woman? Why woman? There is no reason whatsoever for the top third of the picture. No woman, no cry.
The two gentlemen are quite enough. Focused expression, clothing.
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Indeed, the background needs more defocus.
It strikes me as about “Proletariat vs Bourgeoisie” on the field of battle
Street ?
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Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on April 09, 2021, 03:20:14 pm
The two gentlemen are quite enough. Focused expression, clothing.
Also, I think it would be advisable to fix the horizontal tilt, which is another distraction.
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