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Jeremy Roussak

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« on: November 11, 2020, 01:58:18 pm »

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Re: stream
« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2020, 02:05:44 pm »

Lovely setting.
It is more appealing to me if i stop the frame just below the algae on the right hand foreground rock.
i find the boiling water foreground ( and colour) distracting from the pleasant scene since my eye wants to rest near the bridge.
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« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2020, 03:14:22 pm »

I partially agree with Degrub.
My preference would include just a little of the frothy water just below the waterfalls, perhaps a tiny bit lower than he suggested.
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