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Jeremy Roussak

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icy curves
« on: June 18, 2020, 11:32:08 am »

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Re: icy curves
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2020, 10:35:39 pm »

I like it.

But I would be tempted to clone out the dark stuff in the lower middle, so the sweep of the two upper figures dominates more.
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Re: icy curves
« Reply #2 on: June 24, 2020, 05:23:24 pm »

But I would be tempted to clone out the dark stuff in the lower middle, so the sweep of the two upper figures dominates more.

Something like this?

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Re: icy curves
« Reply #3 on: June 24, 2020, 05:50:45 pm »

Yes!

That is perfect for me. But it's your photo, so your preference is paramount.
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Re: icy curves
« Reply #4 on: June 25, 2020, 05:54:55 am »

Yes (to both versions)!

Sufficiently abstract. An eye. Octopus. Well done compositionally.

Nitpicking: grayish.

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Re: icy curves
« Reply #5 on: June 25, 2020, 09:29:42 am »

Something like this?

Jeremy

A lot cleaner. I like it that way.
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Re: icy curves
« Reply #6 on: June 25, 2020, 09:40:58 am »

I prefer the 2nd as well.
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Re: icy curves
« Reply #7 on: June 25, 2020, 02:07:37 pm »

Nitpicking: grayish.

Now you mention it, you're right.

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Re: icy curves
« Reply #8 on: June 25, 2020, 02:22:12 pm »

Nitpicking: grayish.
I agree.
When Slobodan picks nits, it's worth paying attention.
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