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David Eckels

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Another Old Soul
« on: May 25, 2020, 09:23:12 am »

Is this too contrasty? Wanted second opinions. Tired of dithering.

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Re: Another Old Soul
« Reply #1 on: May 25, 2020, 10:28:07 am »

Dave - longer answer with some thoughts about image content and contrast issues. A good deal of this JPEG is crushed black (?) - and the areas other than the brighter/lighter curving shape sitting right on the frame right don't really read as much other than "chatter". Pulling up the blacks and reducing clarity and/or contrast brings the forest background into visual play as a "part or context with the large curved shape". I think that connection is really nice/important as the image can't be fully "abstracted".  As is it's bit of an essay on high frequency contrast...and don't think that is really better than what is actually "in the frame". Shorter answer - I would focus first on the content/principal elements (and their relationship)... then approach degrees of contrast. /B
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Re: Another Old Soul
« Reply #2 on: May 25, 2020, 10:28:58 am »

Not for me. A bit too dark, perhaps: could you lift the whites a little?

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Re: Another Old Soul
« Reply #3 on: May 25, 2020, 11:03:22 am »

Thanks for the comments, Gents!

Brandt: I know the blacks are crushed, if not right on the edge of being so; did that deliberately because the bkg was distracting to my eye. Also played with cropping extensively and chose 1:1 to allow a focus on that wonderful curving trunk. While the histogram stretches from L*a*b* 0:0:0 to 99:1:1, I seem to have missed the mid-tone transitions although there are there in the histogram; it is an HDR blend. I may go back and rework it from a single frame and see if I can reacquire that connection. I was frustrated trying to find emphasis of the curving shape without the busy background taking over.

Jeremy: I realized that it could appeal to some stylistically, but I couldn't quite find the sweet spot for my eye. Not a lot of room at the right end, but maybe I could play on the black end with a tone curve or raise the exposure for the mid-tones, at least before I toss it and start from scratch again!

Once again, thanks for the objective comments.

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Re: Another Old Soul
« Reply #4 on: May 25, 2020, 03:12:34 pm »

Had another go with a single frame. This is quite a bit closer to what I had in mind.

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Re: Another Old Soul
« Reply #5 on: May 25, 2020, 07:35:00 pm »

Yes!
David, I think the new version has just the right amount of context, and the gnarliness of the tree works well.
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Re: Another Old Soul
« Reply #6 on: May 26, 2020, 03:32:34 am »

Thanks for the feedback, Eric.
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