A couple of points:
Generally when elements in the picture are close to each other, it is visually more appealing to separate them either by distance, luminescence or by focus. So the 1st one there is a differentiation made via focus - the main flower is in focus whereas the one bending behind it is out of focus, which is good. However it still somewhat distracts from the main subject - perhaps it can be made even softer or darkened some more, particularly the brightest area on it. Similarly on the color image, there are two flowers competing with each other on the left. Physical separation would have made the composition stronger or one of them could be made selectively softer and darker in post-process to accentuate the other.
Secondly while I like what you are doing by spot-illuminating the flower petals giving it a feeling of the light coming out of the flowers, the color are getting blown-out towards the center. I would cut down the intensity a bit there so there is full color gradation all the way to the bottom of the petals.
Just my 2 cents, FWIW....
:Niranjan