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Leszek Piotrowski

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Mountain Triangles
« on: December 04, 2019, 05:04:48 pm »

Early morning mountain reflections.

So peaceful.

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Re: Mountain Triangles
« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2019, 11:38:59 pm »

Good catch.
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Re: Mountain Triangles
« Reply #2 on: December 05, 2019, 04:11:15 am »

Pyramids… I like those triangular shapes.
Bravo.
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Re: Mountain Triangles
« Reply #3 on: December 05, 2019, 07:39:42 am »

The background is beautiful but the lower 1/4th containing the rocks is distracting. That portion can easily be CAFed (content aware-filled).

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Re: Mountain Triangles
« Reply #4 on: December 06, 2019, 07:34:22 pm »

Thank you Eric,Francois and Rajan.

Rajan, I'll definitely try to improve the lower 1/4 of the frame,.... If not, I'll see if cropping the bottom 1/4 would make an improvement.
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Re: Mountain Triangles
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2019, 01:26:46 pm »

The background is beautiful but the lower 1/4th containing the rocks is distracting. That portion can easily be CAFed (content aware-filled).

If you focus stacked it, it might be less distracting. Also to me the clarity is a bit high, the detail in the rocks cascades feels a bit distracting as the pattern is our central focus here. I'd considering adjusting the detail slider more blurry, and cropping into the pattern.

*edit* - after posting this rendition I like it better with the foreground perhaps. I think I just find it distracting from a technical standpoint as it's not focus stacked.
« Last Edit: December 09, 2019, 03:19:14 pm by maddogmurph »
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Re: Mountain Triangles
« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2019, 11:25:43 am »

The background is beautiful but the lower 1/4th containing the rocks is distracting. That portion can easily be CAFed (content aware-filled).
Yes I agree.  The foreground, even if it was in focus, doesn't add anything to an exceptional background.  Much prefer maddog's version. FWIW.
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Re: Mountain Triangles
« Reply #7 on: December 10, 2019, 07:37:55 pm »

Maddog, Churly,

Yes, absolutely! your input is spot on. 
I'll make adjustments accordingly

Thanks so much to you both.

Leszek
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Re: Mountain Triangles
« Reply #8 on: December 18, 2019, 02:21:08 pm »

Latest version.  Thanks for all the input.

cheers,

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Re: Mountain Triangles
« Reply #9 on: December 18, 2019, 08:21:37 pm »

Much better now.
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