"Indoor Street" maybe?
I sat beside these art dealers, less than 4 feet away, passionately discussing in French something below them on the Paris Photo Fair exhibition floor. They knew I was shooting them and I shot probably 3 minutes of the conversation; fortunately they did not care and I suspect actually assisted me with gesturing. I wanted to capture and express the grandeur of the setting, the passion of the discussion. I assumed I would have to provide the subject of the conversation via the title. I did not want the people themselves to be a value in the image -just their energy- so I intended them to be just barley discernible. Because I am still bad about remembering things into my images afterwards, I am asking:
1) Does the image work at all? Is it too tall? Too dark?
2) Is the passionate discussion captured and rendered?
3) Does the setting convey the grandeur of the environment?
4) Do you get the image is a passionate discussion about art?
5) Are the people sufficiently discernible ?
Thanks in advance for your time and help, -/t