light on the wall

[Jeremy Roussak]

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Jeremy

[Eric Myrvaagnes]

I like it.

(It must have taken hours to build the lattice-work and set up the lights.     )

[petermfiore]

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Jeremy

Hi Jeremy,

Have you tried in B&W? I did and it's stunning.

Peter

[RSL]

Good shooting, Jeremy. Peter's right. When graphics are the centerpiece, B&W almost always wins out.

[RBFritz]

Jeremy, your title brought to mind a shot from a recent trip to Croatia. Ancient wall in Zadar. Fuji XE-1, 18-55 fuji lens. Midday. BTW great shot. Bet you were hoping Eric wouldn't figure out how you set it up....

[Jeremy Roussak]

Jeremy, your title brought to mind a shot from a recent trip to Croatia. Ancient wall in Zadar. Fuji XE-1, 18-55 fuji lens. Midday. BTW great shot. Bet you were hoping Eric wouldn't figure out how you set it up....

And your shot brought this old one of mine to mind.

Jeremy

[Jeremy Roussak]

Have you tried in B&W? I did and it's stunning.

I hadn't, Peter, but now I have and I agree.

Jeremy

[John R]

I hadn't, Peter, but now I have and I agree.

Jeremy

The man has more prominence now, almost equal in visual weight to the light pattern. I suggest the upper part just above the light pattern does nothing for the balance of the image. The upper right small triangle attracts too much attention. I would suggest cropping below that. I already did and it looks great.

JR

[Arlen]

Very strong, especially the B&W version.

[Eric Myrvaagnes]

The BW wins for me, too.