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Todd Suttles

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« on: September 13, 2019, 11:38:02 am »

Which came first?  :)
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« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2019, 12:36:10 pm »

Nice framing and composition. If it were mine, I would tame the highlights in the building a bit, to recover detail.

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« Reply #2 on: September 13, 2019, 01:10:56 pm »

Nice framing and composition. If it were mine, I would tame the highlights in the building a bit, to recover detail.

I agree: recover detail and avoid its drawing the eye. It's sufficiently bright to be the centre of attention, which I suspect isn't your intention.

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« Reply #3 on: September 18, 2019, 03:42:55 pm »

thank you. Enough?
I like it better
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« Reply #4 on: September 18, 2019, 05:31:59 pm »

Much better.
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