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HSakols

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Early Summer in BW
« on: July 01, 2019, 07:00:16 pm »

I found that both of these photographs worked much better in black and white.  Both are from Yosemite Valley. 

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Re: Early Summer in BW
« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2019, 10:09:06 am »

I like the second one. The first doesn't seem to have a focal point or path for my eyes to wander.
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Re: Early Summer in BW
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2019, 10:13:18 am »

I like the second one. The first doesn't seem to have a focal point or path for my eyes to wander.

I wonder if the first would be stronger if more of the corner shadows were visible. Nice experiment.

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Re: Early Summer in BW
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2019, 10:20:30 am »

Thanks for the feedback.  I tried even cropping out the right shadow, but that didn't seem to work. 
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Re: Early Summer in BW
« Reply #4 on: July 02, 2019, 11:39:56 am »

I like both.
The first one needs both shadows for balance.
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