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Jeremy Roussak

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« on: June 29, 2019, 02:26:23 pm »

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churly

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Re: reeds
« Reply #1 on: June 29, 2019, 03:58:46 pm »

Nice job.  I attempt a lot of this type with limited success.
 I think you might try taming some of the highlights along the bottom section. 
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Re: reeds
« Reply #2 on: June 29, 2019, 10:50:38 pm »

I am wrestling with the powerful light and tonality vs what I think is a very busy scene with no strong focus or motif. It certainly has a lot of impact at first glance. Perhaps I should let it sit for a while and see if I change my mind.

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Re: reeds
« Reply #3 on: June 30, 2019, 10:45:25 am »

i settled on the spiderwebs. Couldn't find the spider though.
This needs to be large imo.
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Re: reeds
« Reply #4 on: June 30, 2019, 12:07:29 pm »

Thanks. I think it needs a little more work.

I am wrestling with the powerful light and tonality vs what I think is a very busy scene with no strong focus or motif. It certainly has a lot of impact at first glance. Perhaps I should let it sit for a while and see if I change my mind.

Think of it as abstract. It wasn't intended to have a strong focus.

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