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The Buses are Slow Today
« on: June 22, 2019, 09:57:18 am »

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Re: The Buses are Slow Today
« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2019, 12:05:03 pm »

Great catch, Russ.
All the elements work, with nothing superfluous.

(The bus stopped there but with the door closed suggests that the driver hasn't awakened from his nap to open it. Just one of many possible readings.)
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