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Clearing by morning
« on: June 09, 2019, 08:11:41 pm »

Feedback welcome.

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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2019, 10:43:59 pm »

I like this.

The near-far composition is classic, but here it really works. The bent-over blossoms in the foreground tell what has happened recently, and the background shows the start of the clearing after the storm.

And it's pleasing to look at, too.
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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2019, 12:39:12 am »

+1

Printed big, would be quite suitable for, say, hospitals, creating a sense of serenity. I am saying this as a compliment.

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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #3 on: June 10, 2019, 05:16:29 am »

A very fine image.

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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #4 on: June 10, 2019, 08:16:15 am »

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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #5 on: June 10, 2019, 09:09:10 am »

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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #6 on: June 10, 2019, 09:55:56 pm »

Scott nice comp/image. I'm looking at this on a so so tablet but can see what appears to be a blue violet stroke going upward from bloom near center. It looks a Photoshop e.g. "brush mark". Also a little bit of sim. coloration to right. Any thoughts about this ?
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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #7 on: June 11, 2019, 10:16:54 am »

...a blue violet stroke going upward from bloom near center. It looks a Photoshop e.g. "brush mark". ...

Ouch! Yes, sloppy work on my part. Thanks for pointing this out.

Eric, I was lucky that the sun came out for a moment while I was set up on this.

Thanks to all for your feedback.

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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #8 on: June 11, 2019, 06:50:11 pm »

very well done. An excellent green+violet study, with a easy-running perspective and a clear composition. I like it.
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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #9 on: June 12, 2019, 04:39:44 pm »

Looks fresh & tasty.  8)
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Re: Clearing by morning
« Reply #10 on: June 13, 2019, 10:57:34 pm »

...An excellent green+violet study...

Don't know much about colour theory, but this combination seemed a little jarring. Striking?

Sandro, Biker: thanks!
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