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Ivo_B

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Urban Landscape
« on: June 08, 2019, 12:37:17 pm »

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Re: Urban Landscape
« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2019, 02:54:15 am »

Well, I sent a long time looking a that image and that must mean something.

I like the colours they work well including the foreground.

It's the right edge that bothers me most, I'm not sure that the chimney adds anything. I'd crop that out and then you lose the blue edge diagonal which I don't think adds anything either.

On a lighter note as an English speaker I'd crop a little on the left to lose the E or perhaps crop to lose the upright of the E and the bottom horizontal line of the E by cloning.

Not an obvious image to spot.

Mike
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Re: Urban Landscape
« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2019, 03:05:03 am »

Well, I sent a long time looking a that image and that must mean something.

I like the colours they work well including the foreground.

It's the right edge that bothers me most, I'm not sure that the chimney adds anything. I'd crop that out and then you lose the blue edge diagonal which I don't think adds anything either.

On a lighter note as an English speaker I'd crop a little on the left to lose the E or perhaps crop to lose the upright of the E and the bottom horizontal line of the E by cloning.

Not an obvious image to spot.

Mike

Thanks for you comments Mike, much appreciated.

I understand your remarks, the same considerations made me to crop like this. It’s a wabi sabi thing maybe. The indefinability of the situation, I want to keep it in the image.
Other crops surely would work as well.
Maybe the tweak on the left, yeah. 😈
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