Pages: [1]   Go Down

Author Topic: Old Lime Tree - 1668  (Read 744 times)

rabanito

  • Sr. Member
  • ****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 1577
Old Lime Tree - 1668
« on: April 24, 2019, 01:44:32 pm »

Critiques welcomed. Also as a set
Logged

Jeremy Roussak

  • Administrator
  • Sr. Member
  • *****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 8961
    • site
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #1 on: April 24, 2019, 02:04:54 pm »

I like the fourth best. I wonder how a B&W conversion would look.

Jeremy
Logged

rabanito

  • Sr. Member
  • ****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 1577
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2019, 06:10:44 pm »

I like the fourth best. I wonder how a B&W conversion would look.

Jeremy
That was my first intention when taking the pic  :)
How about this?

Logged

Eric Myrvaagnes

  • Sr. Member
  • ****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 22814
  • http://myrvaagnes.com
    • http://myrvaagnes.com
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2019, 07:56:34 pm »

Like it!
Logged
-Eric Myrvaagnes (visit my website: http://myrvaagnes.com)

John R

  • Sr. Member
  • ****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 5248
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #4 on: April 24, 2019, 08:20:14 pm »

There is a distinct blue-green cast on your bw conversion. Also I think you should try to darken areas around the highlights. That may help accentuate the highlights.

JR
Logged

brandtb

  • Sr. Member
  • ****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 972
    • http://www.brandtbolding.com
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #5 on: April 24, 2019, 09:02:05 pm »

Nice subjects - the second is framed really nicely too. I think that for objects like these and in your shots in particular the clear sun "may not be" the best condition for them. If you are able you might try shooting them again with similar framing in flat light/overcast sky or diffuse sunlight if possible - might be interesting to see what happens.
« Last Edit: April 24, 2019, 09:05:57 pm by brandtb »
Logged
Brandt Bolding
www.brandtbolding.com

Jeremy Roussak

  • Administrator
  • Sr. Member
  • *****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 8961
    • site
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #6 on: April 25, 2019, 02:43:59 am »

That was my first intention when taking the pic  :)
How about this?

Good. The toning is rather heavy-handed, I think.

Jeremy
Logged

rabanito

  • Sr. Member
  • ****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 1577
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #7 on: April 25, 2019, 04:56:40 am »

Good. The toning is rather heavy-handed, I think.

Jeremy

Lets give this a try  :)
Logged

rabanito

  • Sr. Member
  • ****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 1577
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2019, 05:00:49 am »

Nice subjects - the second is framed really nicely too. I think that for objects like these and in your shots in particular the clear sun "may not be" the best condition for them. If you are able you might try shooting them again with similar framing in flat light/overcast sky or diffuse sunlight if possible - might be interesting to see what happens.

I think I agree. I spied on your webpage a little
I'll try it as soon  as some clouds gather. We are having a bright spring  ;)
Logged

Jeremy Roussak

  • Administrator
  • Sr. Member
  • *****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 8961
    • site
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #9 on: April 25, 2019, 02:49:23 pm »

Lets give this a try  :)

Much better.

Jeremy
Logged

Eric Myrvaagnes

  • Sr. Member
  • ****
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 22814
  • http://myrvaagnes.com
    • http://myrvaagnes.com
Re: Old Lime Tree - 1668
« Reply #10 on: April 25, 2019, 06:51:02 pm »

Logged
-Eric Myrvaagnes (visit my website: http://myrvaagnes.com)
Pages: [1]   Go Up