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KMRennie

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Twisleton Scar End
« on: November 19, 2018, 12:15:20 pm »

Sunset from the edge of the limestone pavement above Ingleton in Yorkshire. A day of blue skies until 30 minutes before sunset when a few clouds appeared to add a little colour. Ken
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Re: Twisleton Scar End
« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2018, 12:39:47 pm »

I do like how the mackerel sky mimics the limestone pavement

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Re: Twisleton Scar End
« Reply #2 on: November 21, 2018, 07:39:24 am »

Like the composition, too. This "wedge" is almost like an arrow showing the direction the tree goes.
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Re: Twisleton Scar End
« Reply #3 on: November 21, 2018, 08:33:03 am »

Excellent.
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Re: Twisleton Scar End
« Reply #4 on: November 21, 2018, 11:12:24 am »

Thanks for the positive comments Bill, Stefan and Eric they keep me posting. Looking at it now I think that the bank of mist in the valley is too bright, probably when I merged the sky and foreground exposures together. Ken
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Re: Twisleton Scar End
« Reply #5 on: November 21, 2018, 08:02:46 pm »

Ken, I want to like this more than I do. Great framing, but something doesn't gel for me. Maybe shoot a little lower to simplify the scene by omitting the green hills? One element too many?

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Re: Twisleton Scar End
« Reply #6 on: November 22, 2018, 05:38:47 am »

Thanks Scott. The only problem I was lying on the ground with camera 6" off the ground. The ground behind me was slowly rising so moving backwards dropped the tree into the ground more and I preferred it more against the sunset. I could and probably should have tried moving forward with a 16mm lens, this was 24mm but I didn't think about it until too late. Ken
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Re: Twisleton Scar End
« Reply #7 on: November 22, 2018, 12:47:23 pm »

Very good one.
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