I certainly admire the intent but each shot seems to have an extraneous item in it that is out of place as always to me eye.
The first one has the lady's face on the right. Personally I think she's an irrelevance.
The second has a gentleman on the right - he's certainly interesting but he's also competing in my view pointlessly.
Hmm, maybe this is me as once again it's the figure on the right.
Hmm, maybe my thoughts here are worthless
Mike