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stevieisballer

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Improve
« on: April 09, 2018, 11:33:37 pm »

I’d like to hear yall’s thoughts on this photo?  How can I improve?
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guido

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Re: Improve
« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2018, 08:25:01 am »

I think it is pretty lovely as it is! In a perfect world you could ask for a few more puffy clouds nicely balanced across the sky. And waiting for the sun to come up a touch more and give that nice sunburst effect might make it more dramatic.  But I think the composition is pretty nice, the foreground is interesting with nice texture. I'm a dead tree guy so i'd perhaps pan a tiny bit to the left to get more of that, but it is working well as it is... I think the slow shutter speed to smooth the water is quite effective...

Nicely seen and executed.
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Re: Improve
« Reply #2 on: April 10, 2018, 01:46:46 pm »

Nice composition and execution. It works just fine as is for me.
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Re: Improve
« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2018, 02:48:11 pm »

...a bit heavy on the HDR?  The elongation of the foreground is a bit distracting. That can easily be fixed by copying the bottom half, pasting it over the original, and then scaling down the height by 25% or so.
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Re: Improve
« Reply #4 on: April 10, 2018, 11:23:24 pm »

Thanks for all the input everyone!
...a bit heavy on the HDR?  The elongation of the foreground is a bit distracting. That can easily be fixed by copying the bottom half, pasting it over the original, and then scaling down the height by 25% or so.

I have been trying to find the right balance of HDR.  When you say elongation, do you mean I should just crop up a little to the edge of the puddle?
Thanks!
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