To me it feels as if it wants a bit more contrast, the snow a bit brighter and the shadows darker to add a bit of drama. The cloud works OK for me.
I can't disagree. Something like this, you mean?Jeremy
JeremyOn the image, I shot I lightened the iceberg to give it a bit of separation. Use the HSL sliders in LR to play with the fine tuning a bit. Nice image. Hard to believe it was just a little more than a week ago when we were there.